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Ritual

On both sides of drunk and on both sides of sober, both sides of the truth and both sides a lie lie the two of us. You own the license to my pain, I hold the leasehold to your wounds, we hunger for the ritual embedded in our souls, bruises that won't heal. We can't breathe but what we're bleeding, leeching out the worst of how we feel.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/24/2016 9:39:00 AM
Symbiotic understanding necessary to survive, well done
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/24/2016 10:52:00 AM
Unfortunately, yes... Thanks Kelli. Keith
Date: 1/23/2016 6:31:00 PM
The last stanza speaks to me because that is how I feel when I'm writing sometimes. It does help to write about our inner pain and try to rid ourselves of it... This poem is a deeply moving and well expressed piece. Great writing, Keith!
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/23/2016 9:07:00 PM
So much truth in fiction... Thanks Kelli! Keith

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