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ritual May 7, 2014 at 8:08pm I find that whenever I write or paint I begin with a ritual I light a fire that connects me to the world A fire slows down time as it consumes I take in my surroundings I take in a time of day, a season, sights, sounds and smells How my body feels in particular chair, or sitting on the ground I think about life, death and the universe beyond and before This fire may be literal or metaphorical While writing I may light a candle Or choose to sit outside by an open pit And let the smoke fill my head Before I begin a painting I light a fire within me A fire that burns strong To sustain me For the continuum.

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Date: 6/2/2014 11:30:00 AM
It takes passionate for sure to pursue a gift..Welcome to soup..Sara
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Date: 5/28/2014 6:37:00 AM
Interesting and creative. Congrats on your poem being featured this week,
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Date: 5/22/2014 10:47:00 AM
thank you for the comment on my comment
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Date: 5/20/2014 11:10:00 AM
Dennis, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Dennis Jones
Date: 5/21/2014 5:26:00 AM
Linda, thank you for your warm welcome. Best, Dennis
Date: 5/20/2014 4:33:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Dennis :) - I choose your first great written free verse - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/19/2014 4:59:00 PM
Dennis,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Dennis Jones
Date: 5/19/2014 7:49:00 PM
Skat, thanks much for your kind welcome here. I look forward to getting more aquainted with your poetry. I'm also a painter and I find that each medium feeds the other. Best to you, Dennis
Date: 5/19/2014 4:16:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Dennie. Hope you find much support here. Comment on the poems of other members and they will return the favor. Best wishes.
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Dennis Jones
Date: 5/19/2014 7:46:00 PM
Faye, thank you for your welcome to the soup. I look forward meeting other poets here. Best to you, D.

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