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Rites of Passage

Down the hot sun, I crumble down the snowflakes, One minute, One tribute, Let's have a wintry solitude, Wrapped in a flesher's heartbrokenness, I derelict this relict calf love, Squall on this spur, Am peel in peals... Scuttle the fondle, Dottle the dawdle, Harbouring an everlasting embosom...

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Date: 7/22/2021 1:42:00 PM
Congrats on this winner. Way to go. Sara
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Alshaad Kara
Date: 7/22/2021 11:31:00 PM
Thank you Sara.
Date: 7/18/2021 11:42:00 PM
This is beautiful work. Congratulations!
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Alshaad Kara
Date: 7/19/2021 5:16:00 AM
Thank you.

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