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Rites of Harvest Moon --Hexsonnetta

When harvest moon alights, to sail like gauzy lace on through a cloud’s embrace... I watch her mystic rites, as beaming, she excites my lithesome hours of grace. How glorious the view atop a mountain crowned… with lilies all around that settle on her queue, beguiling eve, anew when sparklers reach the ground. Till weaves of dawn advance which ends fine Luna’s trance. -------------- Andrea Diterich's The HexSonnetta Rhyme Scheme: a/bb/aa/b c/dd/cc/d ee ~ the word glorious has 3 syl count~ 8/22/2015

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Date: 9/28/2015 3:34:00 PM
Congrats on your winning..Way to go..Sara
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Date: 9/21/2015 2:05:00 AM
Wonderful write nette n yet another superb win! Big congrats!
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Date: 9/20/2015 11:20:00 AM
Back to congratulate you, Nette. PS. Sorry for the typo on my previous comment...:-) huggs
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Date: 9/19/2015 4:42:00 PM
As always, you have impressed with your imagery, Nette. BIG congrats in my contest.
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Date: 9/19/2015 4:21:00 PM
Nette, :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win! *SKAT*
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Date: 9/19/2015 3:26:00 PM
Very lovely, Nette. Such soothing imagery that flows like a song. Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/19/2015 3:02:00 PM
So very pleased to be back with congratulations, Nette! Yours has been a winning entry right from the start! Hugs // paul
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Date: 9/19/2015 12:38:00 PM
Lovely, lovely Luna; you did her justice, Nette. Beautiful. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/19/2015 11:47:00 AM
Congratulations nette! I love which ends the luna's trance.
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Date: 9/19/2015 10:11:00 AM
dropping back with mycongrats on your win Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/26/2015 12:21:00 PM
What a lovely HexSonnetta, Nette. Congrats on your POTS! Sorry, I don't know how I could have missed this. hugs!
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Date: 8/25/2015 2:31:00 PM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. dear Nette, August 23 - A beautiful poem ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/23/2015 10:22:00 PM
This is evocative work. I admire the craftsmanship in this poem and wish you good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/23/2015 9:03:00 PM
You have captured Luna's dance that fills the famers hearts with light and love.
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Date: 8/23/2015 8:25:00 PM
Nette, C O N G R A T U L A T I O N S ! on having this beauty selected as Poem Of The Day, enjoy the honor~~
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Date: 8/23/2015 4:34:00 PM
Beautifully written, lovely meter.
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Date: 8/23/2015 3:29:00 PM
Way to go Nette! Congrats on poem of the day!
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Date: 8/23/2015 2:55:00 PM
Congrats, Nette....This is enchanting and sweet. You really work magic with your words.... Hugs
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Date: 8/23/2015 1:03:00 PM
Congratulations. Nature expressed in an awesome manner
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Date: 8/23/2015 8:50:00 AM
Nette, congratulations on your lovely poem being featured as Poem of the Day! Sandra
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Date: 8/23/2015 7:40:00 AM
Wonderful write, Nette, congratulations on Poem of the Day hugs Eve
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Date: 8/23/2015 6:59:00 AM
Dropping back to say congrats on Poem of the day:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/23/2015 4:56:00 AM
I told you! Congratulations, dear nette! Happy for you!
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Date: 8/22/2015 11:29:00 PM
aah, the supple soul, I can picture her there dear poet with her braid hanging with great length and the moon's beam causing her glory...sweet Nette...have a fantastical week my friend...much love, james
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Date: 8/22/2015 6:52:00 PM
Very lovely, Nette. You painted a spectacular picture with the magic of your words. Best wishes for the contest. Sandra
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