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Rite of Passage

“The streams are in my veins” quote from the sponsor Guided Through the ages Endowing the future An heir aroused by sage wisdom Ancestral blood pumps and streams through my veins A pulsating rhythm from the heart through life’s restless currents, A destiny Guided Date: August 5, 2022 For: Let your muse be inspired ~ R form poetry contest Sponsored by: Constance LaFrance Form: Rictameter Syllables verified on howmanysyllables.com Placed 2nd in contest

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Constance La France

Date: 9/6/2022 11:33:00 PM

Paulette, excellent Rictameter poem wonderfully penned and presented and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - Let Your Muse Be Inspired, God Bless ~

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/3/2022 4:41:00 AM

Creative way to go with this winning work. Congratulations. Sara

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/10/2022 1:49:00 PM

Creative lines for the R contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Your visit with congratulations added a new dimension to my page. Sara

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 8/11/2022 5:06:00 AM

Thank you, Sara~I appreciate your encouraging comment. :)Paulette

Mike Gentile

Date: 8/7/2022 5:26:00 AM

I'm feeling a sense of a mystical instinct here Paulette! Well done!! Happy Sunday xxoo

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 8/7/2022 10:19:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed it. Happy Sunday to you too! :)Paulette

John Lawless

Date: 8/6/2022 5:36:00 PM

lest we become a rudderless vessel adrift on the sea of life.....nicely done once again Paulette and with a troubling (for me) form.....

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 8/7/2022 10:21:00 AM

Hi John, as always, I appreciate your poetic comments and praise. Rictameter is not a form I have done often, but I thought it worked with my subject. Happy Sunday,:) Paulette

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/6/2022 1:36:00 AM

Beautiful and to the point. Best for a win.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 8/6/2022 8:51:00 AM

Thank you, Victor. :)Paulette

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/5/2022 4:53:00 PM

Destiny is what guides us through the waters of turbulence and victorious moments of survival, fate is the concrete player in our lives, but we need not see it as un unmovable obstacle, we forge through in Faith and Love, love your deep heart , there is a well of passion inside of you . It makes for a great writer, thank you for sharing, love xo

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 8/5/2022 5:51:00 PM

Dear Vie, thank you so much for your complimentary words~you raise me up! XO P