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Risque Business

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Risque Business

The subway steams in August heat.
At 3 A.M. a lover’s tryst.
Alone at last two in one seat.
The subway steams in August heat.
Their limbs entwine and hips entreat.
He strokes her hair and steals a kiss.
The subway steams in August heat.
At 3 A.M. a lover’s tryst.

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  1. Date: 9/1/2013 2:47:00 PM
    DG... , congratulations!! awesome "Triolet" ... xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 12:21:00 PM
    Passionate steamy winning work..Uniquely creative..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 5:35:00 PM

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 8:29:00 PM
    nicely done....congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 6:30:00 PM
    Congratulations on your entry and win. Love,Joyce

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 2:42:00 PM
    Very creative my sweet Debbie, sorry I haven't been around lately, life can get in the way of writing, Oh what a sin, when that happens, sending you my love and hugs xxx oh congrats

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 1:52:00 PM
    Hmmmm.....I remember this scene !!! It's a little less risky when written as poetry......LOL !! (Tom Cruise........grew up...........or did he?) haha... Great poem, Deb!!

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 8:49:00 AM
    congrats on a fine win with this steamy write

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 7:33:00 AM
    And yet another win. Congratulations on your win

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 7:27:00 AM
    Perfect in every way Debbie!

  1. Date: 8/9/2010 3:52:00 PM
    I haven's seen this movie but I am sure you caught the essence in this great triolet. Congratulations on your first place win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 8/6/2010 11:40:00 AM
    Congratulations Deb on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest "Movie Scene Triolet". This is the first time I have read a triolet or one that I actually have been made aware of should I say. I enjoyed reading yours Deb. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/5/2010 7:32:00 PM
    Excellent! Your words fit this style really well. A well deserve win. congrats, Steve

  1. Date: 8/5/2010 4:02:00 PM
    When I saw this movie during this scene you could have heard a pin drop...the sexual tension in the room was overwhelming...and yet we "saw" nothing.... a marvel of acting, directing & filming & goodness the sound track!

  1. Date: 8/5/2010 2:57:00 PM
    Deb, A BIG CONGRATS. truly my favorite triolet. STEAMY!!!!

  1. Date: 8/5/2010 8:28:00 AM
    Loved this movie then......and still do!!! (And must say, he stole more than a kiss on that speeding subway!!) and.............his mother's glass egg was the least of his problems!! Great pick.....Hip Hooray for you!!! Fun one to remember! :)

  1. Date: 8/5/2010 8:05:00 AM
    great scene! and congrats on your first place win with this cool poem :D

  1. Date: 8/5/2010 8:03:00 AM
    Congrats TEACH on your big first place win for this superb write from a great movie... enjoy your top spot for your top notch write.. perfection.. with luv.. pupil...

  1. Date: 7/30/2010 4:23:00 AM
    Enjoyed your triolet very much, very visual... and now the subway steams for a different reason ;) ~ Sharon :)

  1. Date: 7/27/2010 6:56:00 AM
    enjoyed reading your works today! Great write!