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Risky Whiskey

Our Paddy had a strong liking for whiskey When under its influence he got a bit frisky Didn't think he was able But impregnated Mable A reminder that his kind of behavior is risky Mark Twain-Sometimes to much drink is barely enough

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/25/2015 2:33:00 PM

Perfection indeed…Way to go with this win..Congrats!!Sara

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/22/2015 3:12:00 AM

Brilliant write Barbara! Congrats on a superb win!

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/20/2015 10:01:00 PM

Oops! Funny write, Barbara! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

David Fisher

Date: 7/19/2015 7:16:00 PM

This is a funny one, Barbara! Usually they take away 'his key' with too much whiskey. Way to go on the contest.

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 7/20/2015 10:49:00 AM

Thanks for stopping by..appreciate it..BG

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2015 3:18:00 PM

Loved the naughty humor here. If you had the meter better, this could have been a top winner! Truly funny. Congrats in my contest.

Skat A

Date: 7/19/2015 2:35:00 PM

Barbara, Congratulations on your awesome win... LOVE SKAT

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/19/2015 1:49:00 PM

Great little Limerick, Barbara, and good choice of quote. Congratulations, Viv x

Ralph Sergi

Date: 7/19/2015 1:13:00 PM

A word to the wise and drunks. Great Poem! Congrats on your win.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/19/2015 1:11:00 PM

oh this is priceless lol congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

John Lawless

Date: 6/23/2015 6:24:00 AM

It has been said "when whiskey's on - wits gone".

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/22/2015 4:07:00 PM

Sounds like Mable may not have been his wife?! This is funny, Barbara. I just had to see one with a title like this.

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/22/2015 1:31:00 PM

I really like the title! Nice limerick :)