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Rising In Love

Falling in love A soulful embrace that takes you to heavens, When hearts rhyme and minds resonate, Savouring its taste is living eternity, Falling in love, first love is like being on cloud nine, When days turn bright and colours vibrant, Melody every moment dances to the subtle tune, Beauty in each sight longing for dark nights, Plucked strings of nature and as pitch of notes peaks we rise in love ! Written Sept 30th, 2015 For contest by Aiyah Missed to enter contest Now entered for contest "Best love poem#3" Sponsor- SKAT A Awarded 8th place win

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Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 11/21/2015 1:54:00 AM

"...Falling in love, first love is like being on cloud nine, When days turn bright and colours vibrant, Melody every moment dances to the subtle tune, Beauty in each sight longing for dark nights,..." This is just wonderful Upma,but what is it being in cloud nine ? I will love to know; congrats and hugs.

Skat A

Date: 11/21/2015 12:29:00 AM

Dr. Upma :) Congratulations on your placement. ThanXs for supporting my contest. <3 Love SKAT

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 10/21/2015 7:17:00 AM

Excellent poem Dr. Sharma.

Vandana Sharma

Date: 10/14/2015 12:44:00 AM

Life is beautiful when one has such kind of love, where the two souls rise and cherish everything they have :)

James Inman

Date: 10/12/2015 8:06:00 AM

Very beautifully written.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/10/2015 5:14:00 AM

I love the creative way you ended this poem "plucked strings of nature and as pitch of notes peaks we rise in love !" Sorry you missed entering the contest. This would surely have been a winner!

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/3/2015 9:27:00 PM

A glowing poem and a happy dance in life's radiance my friend! A7

Emile Pinet

Date: 10/1/2015 6:39:00 PM

You managed to nicely capture the scene and the ambiance of the moment well. Emile.

Bob Atkinson

Date: 9/30/2015 1:39:00 AM

Especially ponder #1. Regards, Bob http://poetry-critic.blogspot.com/2015/09/tolstoy-art-criticism.html

Julia Ward

Date: 9/30/2015 1:14:00 AM

Pure happiness is expressed here! Your poem has radiance. Julia, with my kind regards.