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spring gold sun rising reflecting off birdfeeder.... red barn light turned on

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/20/2024 4:27:00 PM

a 'delicious' Haiku, Sara K...so visual and captivating. Have a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/20/2024 4:50:00 PM

Why, thank you, Sara B. I appreciate the visit. I am delighted that the birds think the seeds are delicious. Sara K

Paige Hind

Date: 3/20/2024 4:01:00 PM

Beautiful picture you've made! :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/20/2024 4:47:00 PM

Thank you, Paige. Like the smiley face. Sara K

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/20/2024 12:49:00 PM

Perfect image to wake up to. Much inspiration your poem brings to fore, Sara. Enjoyed reading!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/20/2024 12:55:00 PM

Thank you, Vijay. I appreciate the compliment. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2024 12:12:00 PM

cute contrast with the sun, Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/20/2024 12:50:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. On some mornings when we actually have sun the reflection off the birdfeeder is wonderful. We have had a lot of cloudy days. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/20/2024 10:36:00 AM

What a lovely "risings" Haiku write. I love the red birds. Do not have any here. All at my old house.. What a colorful/pretty picture. Have a wonderful day writing away.................

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/20/2024 12:49:00 PM

Thank you, Paula. I appreciate the time spent here reading and commenting on my work. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/20/2024 9:26:00 AM

Great imagery in your haiku. I don't write haikus much. Today was just an experiment.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/20/2024 12:48:00 PM

Okay, Victor. Great that you experimented. Sometimes it is good to change. Sara K