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Rise O' Sun

Rise O’ sun Rise O’ sun, please come and rise Bring your light to morning skies In pastel colors, pink and red So she will wake this weary bed And I may see her beauty true Illumined by the glow of you I long to gaze her perfect eyes So rise O’ sun, please come and rise Good morning Soupers

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/22/2016 12:26:00 PM

Ty for the pick-me-upper, Chris. Good ole sun will do it every time. Nice poem. Love and more love to you.

Chris Green
Date: 12/26/2016 9:19:00 AM

Thanks so very much Freddie for your always kind words.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/21/2016 1:27:00 PM

- I wish for sunshine me too .... but the sky is dark gray .... no hope for sunshine today ... but it is a pleasure to read your beautiful poem .... you always share happiness, Chris - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green
Date: 12/21/2016 1:33:00 PM

Thanks so very much Anne-Lise for your always kind words. here's hoping you see the sun soon.

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 12/21/2016 9:08:00 AM

The sun is hiding here. So nice to know I can come over to your house for a sunny wakeyup. Thanks! ~ j

Chris Green
Date: 12/21/2016 9:16:00 AM

Sure thing, the coffees on, come on over. :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 12/21/2016 8:07:00 AM

Good morning Chris. What a way to start the day:) Merry Christmas, Chris:)

Chris Green
Date: 12/21/2016 8:47:00 AM

Good morning Daniel and Merry Christmas to you too my friend.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/21/2016 8:04:00 AM

So beautiful! I could see this in print! 7

Chris Green
Date: 12/21/2016 8:46:00 AM

Thank you so very much Kim. Good morning.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/21/2016 7:51:00 AM

Oh it has risen on my isle..and its peeking in between clouds saying Hi : ). Lovely poem Chris..lovely...Bongu.

Chris Green
Date: 12/21/2016 8:46:00 AM

Bongu my sweet friend. Thank you so very much for bringing me a smile this morning

Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/21/2016 7:51:00 AM

I guess I'm the last to read you today, it's already night here, anyway this poem brings a smile to my face:) beautiful, how you blend love and nature:)

Chris Green
Date: 12/21/2016 8:45:00 AM

Thank you so very much Jo. I guess I should then say, good night my friend. :)

Probir Gupta

Date: 12/21/2016 7:40:00 AM

Beautiful love in morning glow ...

Chris Green
Date: 12/21/2016 8:45:00 AM

Thank you so much Probir. Good morning

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/21/2016 7:24:00 AM

Nice one to read this morning , Chris :)

Chris Green
Date: 12/21/2016 8:45:00 AM

Thank you so very much Heidi. Good morning

Darren White

Date: 12/21/2016 5:55:00 AM

It reminds me of "Black Hole Sun" but much, much more positive. It's not that your poem reminds me of it, it's more that the title triggered the song to the front of my mind :) I love your morning poem so much, as always. I hope you will have a bright and sunny day ahead of you.

Chris Green
Date: 12/21/2016 8:44:00 AM

Same to you my friend. Thank you so much