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Rise and Shine Sport

Rise and Shine Sport, Trucks and cars everywhere All cars have their share On never ending roads Filled with heavy loads So roads need support Rise and shine sport, Drivers with selfish greed Drivers who cannot read The rules of the book. My mother is the rook The twats are other sorts Rise and shine sport, The clock is ticking. Better keep driving Until time runs out, Her boss runs her mouth And files her report Rise and shine sport, My heart pounds and pounds Like a merry go round Eyes on a ring road Or stitches would be shown Might as well find the airport

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Date: 5/9/2020 10:58:00 AM
A driver who drives for a living, with a balanced perspective. Inspiring readers to do their duties (jobs) and not overthink the challenges. Title & theme comes through with matching rhythm. Thanks; visit mine if U could, please. shalom, anil s. deo.
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Mark Anthony Bartolo
Date: 5/9/2020 12:03:00 PM
Hi. Thanks for the feedback. I apologize if this poem has offended you. I wasnt referring to every driver in the world. It's just nowadays in my country the way people drive is quite dangerous.

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