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Rise and Fall

RISE iNtEnSiTy Of BeAtS, trapping hailstorm in landlocked gorge. nose flARes as I procure brisk air, balloon deflates at dread’s FALL 4/14/2020 Let the Pens Flow - Antonym Poetry Contest Sponsor: Jenish Somadas Syllables: 1/14/14/1

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Jc Hawkens

Date: 4/18/2020 8:16:00 AM

Congratulations Kim, I love how wrote this. Stunning imagery as well.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/18/2020 6:48:00 PM

I greatly appreciate that JC!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/16/2020 6:05:00 PM

I really like the way you showed the fall of hail with the short/long letters together. Clever!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/16/2020 8:14:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

Jenish Somadas

Date: 4/16/2020 1:49:00 AM

Congrats on your placement.. I'm honored to have your entry Kim..

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/16/2020 8:12:00 PM

Thank you, Jenish! All about getting through this covid-19. <3 Kim

Howard Kerr

Date: 4/15/2020 2:19:00 PM

Well done, Kim. A superb contest entry. Imaginative. Howard

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/15/2020 2:22:00 PM

Thank you, Howard!

Jcb Brul

Date: 4/15/2020 5:08:00 AM

Another poem that is uniquely yours dear poet Kim. Happy to find this gem.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/15/2020 8:18:00 AM

Thank you, sweet poet!

Pashang Salehi

Date: 4/14/2020 1:18:00 PM

very interesting... nicely done.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2020 1:22:00 PM

Thank you, Pashang!

Probir Gupta

Date: 4/14/2020 12:10:00 PM

Lovely rise and fall ...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2020 1:22:00 PM

Thank you, Probir!