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Rise Above It

Masked Butterflies Hanging by two strings like Leonardo DaVinci’s captivating Image of man, I ponder past times. Holding for the dearest, To the thought of the world below my feet, reigning so high, I can imagine the brightest of futures. For months I hold still In a vulnerable but bearable position with a fantastic view of The world over both shoulders. To my right, a vision, a dream, A light, a heaven on Earth, a life of happiness and strength, but A long road to lead to such success. To my left, a small, cozy, Peaceful, and easily accessible village, with rivers gently Flowing downstream. On my shoulder rests a butterfly, or so I thought based on What I perceive as wings and how pleasantly he flaps. He sits Comfortably, where my vision is weak. Patiently, he listens to The cries of my choices and observes the desperation of my Physical hold to keep a firm grip on both strings. Acknowledging The facts related to each view, he quenches my mind with the best Outcomes while nourishing my thirst, since my hands are So blindly tied. Swiftly, I find myself swinging to the heaven I always wanted. Glancing back, I see that the string in my left hand was slowly Unraveled by the jagged teeth of the moth, whom I thought Was a butterfly. Someone I once called my friend, I now Notice he only has one wing. Inhibited, he could not fly to The local but non-prosperous village that lay directly to my left. He smiles in deceit, as he took my string without realizing that I am on my way to the heaven I will call my home.

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Date: 6/16/2016 12:18:00 PM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, George. :)
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Date: 6/15/2016 8:21:00 AM
George,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Date: 6/14/2016 5:42:00 PM
George,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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