Rise & Shine

four o'clock in June first light,the unearthly hour robin,calls the tune

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/17/2009 5:42:00 PM

Chirp Chirp I can hear him call his tune is your expressive words in this haiku.. great way to end my day... almost time to rise and shine soon... good day Brian... luv Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Naomi Jenkins

Date: 6/12/2009 1:54:00 PM

Your little pieces inspire me to write, thank you!

Charlene Bird

Date: 6/11/2009 1:26:00 PM

Those lovely sounds outside our window that makes you feel happy to be alive, which is what your poetry all says to me dear Brian. In response to your comment on my poem, it is beautiful and wonderful that you still see the same woman who has been with you through the years. Congradulation on being witht that special one for so long.

Sharon Winter

Date: 6/11/2009 11:55:00 AM

The sound never ceases to inspire me and to make me feel grateful to rise in the morn. Very beautiful. Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

Date: 6/11/2009 5:37:00 AM

The unearthly hour....love that line...love the last line...good work.