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Each sway tips the wreckage Still, it lies below Barely feeling movement Just the tug of ebb and flow There you lie in waiting Questions slip and slide What's the use if it's all fleeting? Why endure another tide? Answers rise, with you in tow Stirred from deep within your core There's beauty in tomorrow And there's hope upon the shore

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Date: 2/9/2015 7:20:00 PM
This is a great poem of hope, I felt the emotions swimming throughout it. Emile.
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Jean Omalley Polatnick
Date: 2/10/2015 12:07:00 PM
Thanks so much ... I really appreciate your thoughts!
Date: 1/24/2015 7:49:00 AM
Jean, love the ending thought. :) have a nice day ~SKAT~
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Jean Omalley Polatnick
Date: 2/3/2015 3:35:00 PM
Yes; as long as we have hope ... right!?! : )

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