Rise

Why are you so sad? Loneliness in your eyes Surrounded by darkness Never ah sunrise! Why are you so sad? Mother of the tides Are you the only one left? Are you the only one of you kind? Why are you so sad ? Queen of the sea Is there somewhere else you rather be? If this is true The things I've said Rise,Rise,RISE from these water's instead!

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Skat A

Date: 8/17/2013 11:10:00 PM

CONGRATS on having your poem featured this week........ Love ~ SKAT ~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/17/2013 10:25:00 PM

Victoria, . Congratulations!!! It's nice to see your poem Featured on the soups Home Page, this past week :-) goodnight~ Luv* LINDA *

Adarsh Raj

Date: 8/14/2013 8:42:00 AM

WOW!!!!!! Made my day!!!!! so beautiful................:) adarsh

Danesh Morgan

Date: 8/14/2013 8:33:00 AM

very nice poem, it rings and hit the bells, wit notes that reaches high, and down it comes to a climax!

Skat A

Date: 8/5/2013 8:44:00 PM

Victoria,,, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless..... Hugs* SKAT *

Victoria Howard
Date: 8/10/2013 5:13:00 PM

Thanks for your comment I'm glad you like I'm looking forward to viewing your work an glad to be part of the family

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/5/2013 3:39:00 PM

hello Victoria, Queen of the sea... awsome poem -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@....

Victoria Howard
Date: 8/10/2013 5:14:00 PM

Thank you very much I'm glad to meet new people with the same desires an ambition looking forward to viewing your work

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/5/2013 12:23:00 PM

Hello new member: Victoria ! - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Victoria Howard
Date: 8/10/2013 5:16:00 PM

Thanks for your reply an I'm glad to be part of the family