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Ripples of the water

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Ripples of the water

Watch the ripples of the water
The trickles sounding  like laughter
As pebbles tickle its flow

Pools of delight with crabs inside
Limpets clinging on against the tide
Children's faces aglow

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  1. Date: 12/7/2012 10:59:00 AM
    Congratulations on your super win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme" contest Seren. Love Carol

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 4:58:00 PM
    Seren., ;-) congratulations in Susan's "Favorite tail rhyme, past or present contest" Enjoyed reading all her winners. Have yourself a good and wonderful day. take care~:-) LINDA

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 2:20:00 PM
    Love your writes Seren, Congrats on your well deserved win in Susan’s contest!

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 1:30:00 PM
    Big Big Congratulations my little Welsh Leek . well done xx

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 9:43:00 AM
    congrats Seren on a lovely write and win luv ..

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 12/4/2012 1:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Linda....Seren
  1. Date: 12/4/2012 7:51:00 AM
    Lovely, congrats!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 12/4/2012 1:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Richard.....Seren
  1. Date: 11/21/2012 2:25:00 PM
    Lovely remnant of summer picture! fav line [Limpets clinging on against the tide] Happy Thanksgiving Light & Love

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 11/21/2012 5:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Debbie, i can remember then being impossible to move... Seren
  1. Date: 11/21/2012 1:47:00 PM
    What a lovely tail rhyme you have done here it's nearly as good as that pencil sketch you did o f my son which I may post as a blog lol xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 11/21/2012 1:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the compliment ( i think it was) lol, you trying to embarrass me ....Seren
  1. Date: 11/20/2012 10:26:00 AM
    Very nice Tail rhyme by you here Seren!Best wishes for the contest.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 11/20/2012 10:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Kash Poet