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Ripples of the Water

Watch the ripples of the water The trickles sounding  like laughter As pebbles tickle its flow Pools of delight with crabs inside Limpets clinging on against the tide Children's faces aglow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/7/2012 10:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme" contest Seren. Love Carol
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Date: 12/4/2012 4:58:00 PM
Seren., ;-) congratulations in Susan's "Favorite tail rhyme, past or present contest" Enjoyed reading all her winners. Have yourself a good and wonderful day. take care~:-) LINDA
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Date: 12/4/2012 1:30:00 PM
Big Big Congratulations my little Welsh Leek . well done xx
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Date: 12/4/2012 9:43:00 AM
congrats Seren on a lovely write and win luv ..
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/4/2012 1:07:00 PM
thank you Linda....Seren
Date: 12/4/2012 7:51:00 AM
Lovely, congrats!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/4/2012 1:09:00 PM
Thanks Richard.....Seren
Date: 11/21/2012 2:25:00 PM
Lovely remnant of summer picture! fav line [Limpets clinging on against the tide] Happy Thanksgiving Light & Love
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/21/2012 5:24:00 PM
thanks Debbie, i can remember then being impossible to move... Seren
Date: 11/21/2012 1:47:00 PM
What a lovely tail rhyme you have done here it's nearly as good as that pencil sketch you did o f my son which I may post as a blog lol xx
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Date: 11/21/2012 1:54:00 PM
Thanks for the compliment ( i think it was) lol, you trying to embarrass me ....Seren
Date: 11/20/2012 10:26:00 AM
Very nice Tail rhyme by you here Seren!Best wishes for the contest.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/20/2012 10:08:00 PM
Thank you Kash Poet

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