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Ripples of Pain

I sit in sadness, wondering why i feel like all my wounds inside me won't heal the pain is like water the ripples never stop they crash against my soul beating at the barriers till they flow over the top

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Date: 10/10/2010 12:49:00 PM
really good write thank you duncan
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Date: 2/2/2010 11:37:00 AM
Sad write that is greatly interspersed with metaphoric language. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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