Ripples In the Water

Ripples in the lake Remember thoughts vanishing In a rainy day Releasing heavy burden Carried in the mind and soul

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Susan Ashley

Date: 8/28/2017 7:28:00 PM

A lovely poetic expression of letting go and surrendering worry.., to a Higher Power perhaps... Or through meditation..? An excellent write with wonderful imagery Nayda! :)

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/28/2017 9:38:00 PM

Thank you Susan.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 8/26/2017 12:53:00 PM

Nice Imagery. Let me try.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/26/2017 2:47:00 PM

Thank you Anisha.

Constance La France

Date: 8/26/2017 5:08:00 AM

Nayda, this is very lovely, so dreamy ~~

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/26/2017 6:37:00 AM

Indeed Constance. Thank you.

Mike Gentile

Date: 8/24/2017 12:50:00 PM

Ripples, just like thoughts dropped into the lake of our subconscious mind I really enjoyed

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/24/2017 1:19:00 PM

Thank you Mike.