Ripples

Ripples in the air, invisible waves from wings... Butterfly effect.

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/19/2015 9:17:00 AM

I like it, congrats.

George Aul
Date: 12/19/2015 2:24:00 PM

Thank you.......... George

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/18/2015 11:28:00 PM

Great take with this lovely poem george.. Congrats on big win!

George Aul
Date: 12/19/2015 2:28:00 PM

Thanks for the reply............ George

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/18/2015 4:36:00 PM

oh, I remember the wonderful movie of that name. Love that word play. Congrats, George. Nice seeing you here.

George Aul
Date: 12/21/2015 9:34:00 AM

Thanks, never knew there was a movie made with the same name. The butterfly effect is a physics theorem that something as small as a butterfly moving its wings can change the air currents around the world with ripples getting larger the farther out they reach.

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/18/2015 4:24:00 PM

Congrats on the placement here George.'

George Aul
Date: 12/21/2015 9:31:00 AM

Thanks........... George

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/18/2015 1:57:00 AM

George, Congratulations on your wonderful butterfly win. Love LINDA

George Aul
Date: 12/18/2015 11:09:00 AM

Thanks for the comment............. George

Skat A

Date: 12/17/2015 7:48:00 PM

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George Aul
Date: 12/18/2015 11:08:00 AM

Thanks for sponsoring this contest, SKAT..............George

Harpreet Kaur

Date: 3/6/2015 11:34:00 PM

Thumbs up for your creation!

George Aul
Date: 3/7/2015 12:42:00 PM

Thank you for your words....... George

Jan Allison

Date: 3/6/2015 3:45:00 PM

beautiful haiku:-) Hugs Jan xx

George Aul
Date: 3/7/2015 12:42:00 PM

Thank you very much......... George