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I am writing a book on mental health is Seven-Liners. This is one little epsiode from it.

Ripped Ripples When she dived off the bridge ripples broke free from the surface Her throbbing heart had thumped a pounding shiver into darkness Concentric circles brought a mirror image to the bottom of the river Tampered with undulations and quivers’ hesitation now absolved Strafed yet scarfed she placed layer upon layer into a slumbering swirl One never jumps into the same river twice she pondered as she Cherished the everlasting moment of lonely saltation with no return

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Date: 10/27/2017 2:28:00 PM
Wow Kai, this sadness is so beautifully expressed. Your imagery is beautifully artistic. Your last two lines are exquisite. A fantastic write!
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 11/22/2017 6:49:00 AM
Thank you Susan. Good greetings to you. Kai
Date: 8/27/2017 9:13:00 AM
Wonderful writing, Kai:) jumping to one's death sending strong ripples up here..
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 11/22/2017 6:49:00 AM
Thank you Jo. Many wishes, Kai

Book: Shattered Sighs