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Ripped From Me

i was to blind to see what you ripped from me you ripped my peace you ripped my love and you killed everything now i am above i gave up and i dont exist you hurt me so bad i had to get away from it this is the end as we see i am in the coffin all because of thee you tore me down you destroyed my peace you built me up just to demolish me i dont understand why would you do this to me what all i did was keep you company keep you happy love you and care for you but now i dont know what to do so i just left it all to you and what do you do just ripped it from me tore me in pieces and threw them away from me my love and life both separated when they are both supposed to be intertwined i didn't die not physically but mentally i gave up any way let me live j\ just for family friends maybe but not personally if it was for me i wouldnt live any way it hurt to much feeling the pain raise in me but you dont see cause you are happy another man another person who you will rip and destroy inside why collect hearts and destroy them one by one while you keep one and love it with your life?

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Date: 10/10/2013 3:02:00 PM
That's women for you Dylan lol.nicely written and personified. Take care, Richard
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Dylan Manassian
Date: 10/18/2013 3:26:00 PM
hey i am deeply sorry i didnt write so much this week. it is cause i have school and home work to do .

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