Ripe Muscadines

. Ambrosial essence To the eyes nose palate... Deers jump six foot fence

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Iolanda Scripca

Date: 9/19/2010 3:44:00 PM

These deer are very naughty :) I hope they don't get drunk with the special juices :) Thanks for your comment. Love, iolanda

Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/18/2010 6:54:00 AM

Great Haiku a tribute to Muscadine grapes and wine, Sara! Can understand well this deer! Tank you for commenting Maple Leaves! Yes, Sara, we here in Germany have some different Maple species, the Syrup however comes from Canada and the US! Enjoy your weekend!...Gert

Monica Evette

Date: 9/15/2010 12:15:00 PM

Like this one Sara. I'm from Alabama so I know what Muscadines are. There is actually a great wine made in Bama from Muscadines. You just made me think of home.

Diane Locksley

Date: 9/15/2010 10:45:00 AM

The deer just couldn't resist! Very cool haiku with a great image, Sara. Diane

Katherine Stella

Date: 9/15/2010 4:10:00 AM

tis the season for hunting too up in the northland I just could not take one down they are so beautiful great write here my friend also thanks so much for all your kind comments on my work I will be back around to give ya more I am just trying to get back on soup saddle lol keep up the great writing blessings to you and family

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/14/2010 10:19:00 PM

A very interesting one, Sara . How are you doing these days?

James Peranteau

Date: 9/14/2010 6:52:00 AM

What a fantastic Haiku Sara ! This goes right to mine favz if ya don't mind ! james

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/14/2010 5:16:00 AM

yes they are worth the risk...yum!