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Ripe

life's meager, bottled thrust of water opens lid, moist earth ripens

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/18/2013 3:11:00 PM
very creative and original metaphor. a happy blending of words
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Pushpa Palanchoke
Date: 11/24/2014 1:11:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 10/18/2013 3:08:00 PM
Interesting Haiku;..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara
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Pushpa Palanchoke
Date: 11/24/2014 1:12:00 PM
Thank you Sara :)
Date: 10/17/2013 10:19:00 PM
Nice images to convey a thought, Puspa
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Pushpa Palanchoke
Date: 11/24/2014 1:12:00 PM
Dr. Mehta, Thank you :)

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