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Ripe

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Ripe

life's meager, bottled
thrust of water opens lid,
moist earth ripens

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  1. Date: 10/18/2013 3:11:00 PM
    very creative and original metaphor. a happy blending of words

    Palanchoke Avatar Pushpa Palanchoke
    Date: 11/24/2014 1:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you :)
  1. Date: 10/18/2013 3:08:00 PM
    Interesting Haiku;..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara

    Palanchoke Avatar Pushpa Palanchoke
    Date: 11/24/2014 1:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Sara :)
  1. Date: 10/17/2013 10:19:00 PM
    Nice images to convey a thought, Puspa

    Palanchoke Avatar Pushpa Palanchoke
    Date: 11/24/2014 1:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Dr. Mehta, Thank you :)