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Rip Van Winkle

After a long, long snooze Rip Van Winkle, Woke with a start, his duds all a-wrinkle! Said he, a bit dotty, "Quick! Bring me a potty! I'm in need of a humongous tinkle!" Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired (c) 2015 All Rights Reserved

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/14/2015 11:23:00 AM

I love your witty ways, Robert.. you just made my day; so funny!.. huggs

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 3/13/2015 10:16:00 PM

G'day Robert... Ha ha Robert... and so began the tale of Noah's Ark with the big flood. Thank you Robert - Lindsay

Jan Allison

Date: 3/13/2015 6:52:00 PM

ha ha ha great write Robert:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 3/14/2015 10:49:00 AM

Thank you Jan. Always great to hear from you - have a grand weekend - bob

Tim Smith

Date: 3/13/2015 5:25:00 PM

lol...great one Bob...cheers Tim

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 3/13/2015 6:56:00 PM

Thx Tim - glad this one gave you some laffs - bob

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/13/2015 3:45:00 PM

Ha, ha! Good one Bob! Love, Kim

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 3/13/2015 6:55:00 PM

Thanks Kim - glad it gave you a laff - bob