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Rip Betty

We come to you in a time of need To help us understand the loss of life that was taken away A heart of gold With a loving soul that no one could replace. The smile upon your face will never fade away. Comfort our tears, Hold our hands, Wrap your arms around the suffering Remind us she is never gone For now she is our angel looking down. Spreading her wings and giving them a try As she protects us through the night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/31/2013 8:41:00 AM
Very touching dedication... Sorry for your loss.
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Date: 1/30/2013 2:01:00 PM
this is wonderful Cory, so heartfelt....
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Date: 1/29/2013 11:13:00 PM
Hi Cory, how have you been? Touching write this. The value of life and living makes death harder to accept - memories serve to comfort but can never compare to the real thing. You’ve brought it out well. I sure hope to read more of your work. Vicky
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Date: 1/29/2013 10:19:00 PM
This is a beautiful and superior write my friend! I truly enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this evening! What an intriguing piece, Great Work!!
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