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Ring that bell

It's very strange by yourself, In a home that meant so much, My nights are weird I make no sense, I'm speaking double Dutch. What I mean ,I just can't tell, if only my head was clear I keep most problems too myself It's a problem I do fear. No wonder I feel so let down, I thought I would cope well, I really thought we would get through, For my love to ring that Bell.

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Date: 4/14/2024 1:41:00 PM
Well she left due to the double Dutch lingo dude. Try some luv poetry :)
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/14/2024 2:34:00 PM
Oh sorry I thought this was written tongue in cheek. My mistake. So sorry for your loss Erich
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Erich Von der geest
Date: 4/14/2024 1:53:00 PM
Sorry but she left due to cervical cancer. I believe double Dutch to be a saying in the UK that I'm not making much sense in my grieving process. Maybe when my feelings are positive then I may write poems with some love ,but at the moment that's further from my mind.

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