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Ring of Truth

It’s not with finger, you’ll wear this ring It’s to be worn with heart and soul For there was a man who wore it proud From whom, death took its toll He knew one day, the ring would find Its way to the destined one So wear it proudly for him now You are that man’s only son You may not know, he loved you so But life has a way to turn It’s with grief, you take possession But with hope that you will learn The man, from where the ring had come Was strong, proud and true A sickness came, stole him away But he left this ring for you You may harbor anger, that’s your right That may never go away Remember, there was a man who loved you so With this ring, carry him, today When my brother died, he was wearing a claddagh ring I had given to him when he was sent to the Persian Gulf during wartime there. It was my ring and I told him to bring it back to me. His son was 1 year old when he died and I hadn't been able to locate him until last year and now he's 17 and he told me that his mom (the devil) told him that I took his fathers ring when he died. I sent it to him along with this poem because I didn't have the heart to tell him the truth.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/20/2008 10:35:00 AM
A beautifully written poem with a sad story behind it, Michael. The Claddagh is such a powerful symbol of love, friendship and loyalty. I am hoping that the love, friendship and loyalty that you shared with your brother continues to grow with your nephew. Nigel
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Date: 11/20/2008 9:35:00 AM
Michael - very powerful and moving poem - I never knew my father and just in the last year or so have i got to know my sisters and brother on his side - i have got a couple of his things now that I do treasure very deeply - hopefully your brothers son will treasure the ring as I do my fathers things that I now have - Beautiful poetry - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 11/20/2008 8:12:00 AM
michael This is very special boy what a story behind this beautiful thoughtful write. I am just captivated by this story. It is a story and and a very touching one at that. Love this Michael I will try to read your poems and comment on the rest of them I m trying to get my joy back up. What a story and what a poem. A very special one for sure. Michael Torres
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Date: 11/20/2008 5:50:00 AM
My poem today is something along these lines. Hope you have a relationship with this young man now...I have a feeling he could use you in his life. Lovely write. BG
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