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Ring Full of Daisies

A ring full of daisies weaved in her hair adorns a white cotton sundress as she twirls through the air a heavenly tune plays only for her the world's at a standstill as her dream scenes come true she's in love with the blue bird plays tag with the squirrels she speaks with the sweet swan understanding each word she's a vision of lovely God's gracing gift nothing restrains her a princess adrift with the sun shining down through cracks in skies mist her smile is beaming at peace with life's twists

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Date: 8/28/2016 8:04:00 AM
As I read this one I imagine Snow White. It has a fairy tale sweetness to it.
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Date: 4/1/2016 4:30:00 PM
Very sweet with lovely imagery, Tim. A belated congratulations on your Poem of the Day honor. Sandra
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Date: 3/30/2016 8:53:00 AM
And ...I thought you couldn't get any better! Congratulations....
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Date: 3/30/2016 12:28:00 AM
Simply beautiful. Congrats!
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Date: 3/29/2016 10:52:00 PM
Brilliantly sweet, congratulations POTD, well done
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Date: 3/29/2016 10:02:00 PM
Really nice POTD Tim! Yes, written by a man with daughters! Congrats!
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Date: 3/29/2016 6:02:00 PM
I love it. Simple and sweet. Good job, Tim.
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Tim Smith
Date: 3/29/2016 6:06:00 PM
Thank you very much Marilyn, Have a great night.
Date: 3/29/2016 3:17:00 PM
Beautiful poem and a beautiful woman, Tm
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Date: 3/29/2016 4:30:00 PM
Thanks Ralph. You are right about the woman : )
Date: 3/29/2016 12:41:00 PM
Beautiful poem! Congrats on POTD. Your daughter?
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Date: 3/29/2016 4:29:00 PM
Thanks Tom...I have two beautiful daughters but not about them. I was with them right before I wrote this so their was some happiness inside me from the visit.
Date: 3/29/2016 10:19:00 AM
Thank You. Wonderful verbal image display.
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Date: 3/29/2016 10:58:00 AM
Thanks Jim for the compliment. I will head over to your page.
Date: 3/29/2016 7:50:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Tim. Is this your daughter or your woman. Someone's awful happy. Really nice, Tim. Peace my friend:)
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Date: 3/29/2016 10:57:00 AM
Thanks DT...Happy is a good word. Great weekend with the kids will do that.
Date: 3/29/2016 7:13:00 AM
Delightful imagery Tim many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/29/2016 10:56:00 AM
Thanks Jan. I wasn't expecting this.
Date: 3/29/2016 7:07:00 AM
Congrats on POTD Tim...well done my friend...^WW^
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Date: 3/29/2016 10:55:00 AM
Thank you my warrior friend.
Date: 3/29/2016 6:11:00 AM
- Really beautiful, Tim - CONGRATULATIONS P.O.T.D. ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/29/2016 10:55:00 AM
Thanks A-L...I am pleasantly surprised
Date: 3/28/2016 4:59:00 PM
How beautiful this is, how romantic such words, a fave.
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Date: 3/28/2016 5:26:00 PM
Thanks Charmaine, Sometimes I do like to write a little romance...have a good night,,,thanks for the fave : )
Date: 3/28/2016 1:15:00 PM
Beautiful imagery my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 3/28/2016 5:25:00 PM
Thank you my good friend BL
Date: 3/28/2016 4:11:00 AM
OK ,..guess its down to me ... 23 reads , 2 comments and a title incorrectly spelt but salvagable ' Daisies" .... line 5 has a rogue word, take a pick " at to " dreamy write
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Date: 3/28/2016 5:54:00 AM
Thanks Ian.
Date: 3/27/2016 9:59:00 PM
This is so sweet. Happy Easter Hugs Edith
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Tim Smith
Date: 3/28/2016 5:23:00 PM
Thank you so much Edith

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