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Rigid Mountain

Rigid Mountain There is a place where all minds go To the Rigid Mountain range Of blackened streams And hopeless dreams To stop and rearrange There is a place where thinkers sit On rigid rocks and broken clocks Of cedar trees And willing pleas As empty boats undock There is a place where skies are bright And hopeful golden rays Lift their thoughts and hopes to float Above the Rigid Mountain choke To skies of song and play There is a place, above the range Where hands all grasp in hope For men with wings To lift their dreams Where lovers interlope That is where dreams lie

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/3/2016 10:08:00 PM
hope you post a new poem, WW
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Date: 4/29/2016 11:39:00 PM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Willow. :)
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Date: 4/29/2016 11:34:00 PM
Hi WW, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead.......with love.
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Date: 4/29/2016 8:47:00 PM
Hi Willow, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/29/2016 8:18:00 PM
Willow,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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