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Right Or Wrong

Right or Wrong By Dane Smith-Johnsen Right or wrong goes along. Every option has stayed. Righteous souls in the throng Sing truths; hopes are prayed. Stop! Study! Be approved. Sing praises; oh sweet Lord. Thank Him for sin removed. Put away hate drawn swords. Never fear; God is near. He’ll take your hand and lead. Keep Him forever dear. And all His teachings heed. Throughout life choices made Determined the paths we took. All the while, God's love stayed. From Heaven, the earth shook. Lose thyself; truly love. And heed the still small voice. Holy Spirit above, Shall lead us through each choice. The humble-faithful wait. Saint Peter calls their name. They run to heaven's gate. And see their Savior reign God from Heaven watches. He hears every thought. Sin, through Christ God washes. Redemptions through blood bought.

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Date: 11/11/2009 9:02:00 AM
=D i would LOVE a cat like that lol. cats are one of my favorite creatures. i use to have cats...many many cats...when my mom got prego she made me get rid of them all =( now my dad wont let me have another. my last cat was named Suspect. he was a beautiful tigerish kitten. thank you for your comments and sharing about your daughters cat =) give it a good pet down for me will ya? blessed be xo Raiin
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Date: 11/9/2009 1:21:00 PM
Wonderful. spread the gospel. John H. Loving III
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Date: 11/8/2009 5:05:00 PM
You always provide us with wonderful inspiration, Dane. Thank you for sharing your faith and love with us. Much love to you, Carolyn
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Date: 11/8/2009 2:09:00 PM
Soup Mail for you! Karen
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Date: 11/8/2009 1:57:00 PM
WONDERFUL INSPIRATION MESSAGE - DEAR DANE ANN. THANK YOU FOR SHARING. LOVE, LAINIE
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Date: 11/8/2009 1:29:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme to convey this inspirational message. So much truth in your words. Blessings to you for sharing them. Thank you for you kind comment. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 11/8/2009 12:37:00 PM
I Love these types of writes of yours Dane, you may keep them coming for my part if you wish! I love the truths you thread into the poem such as"Stop, study and be approved ( II Tim 2:15)" "Smile, I just don't know who that anonymous Gal with the puckered lips is! Sincerely, love, Moses
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Date: 11/8/2009 7:57:00 AM
Hi Dane Ann, thank you for your comment on the German version of Atacama! Isn't it grat to have a daughter like Ingrid? It's always so good to know different languages. Lovely if you are going to improve your Spanish and German. Both literatures are so rich! When I have moved to the Czech and Polish border I will also try to learn Czech. It's always good if you're in another country and know the language. Love, Gert
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Date: 11/8/2009 7:45:00 AM
Just posted my "list" 4 U ... use first 2 lines for your "Our Many Blessings" .. I added just a few more words here and there so go to my poems and read the latest version than the one sent via aol e mail... have mentioned to others already... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/8/2009 6:04:00 AM
Although I'm not a truely religous person I still believe in God. You did a great job with this Quatrain, Dane Ann! Y muchas gracias por el comentario de Atacama. Having lived near in the late 1960ies, I used to go there frequently as I helped the archeological dept. of the University there and also illustrated the first tourist guide to the interior of the Atacama Desert. What an experience that was! Hope you hae a nice and relaxing weekend...Gert
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Date: 11/8/2009 4:48:00 AM
Quite inspirational and words flowing so gracefully, Dane, such a wonderful tribute to God.. its the only way to start the day and u have started my Sunday in a special way.. u might enjoy reading "Remember me, God?" poem .. I try to be a versatile poet covering many subjects to share with Soupers... also am trying to compose a poem for each new wonderful friend I have met thus far .. so yours is in the making... happy Sunday.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/7/2009 9:42:00 PM
Very nice...enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 11/7/2009 7:13:00 PM
This flows beautifully, and rings in my head like a hymn! Lovely, Dane Ann! Hugs, Donna
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