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,(Triolet) One day Jesus will just return He sits by His Father right now In Heaven till when it's His turn One day Jesus will just return Soul at peace I have no concern For have Him in heart and that's how One day Jesus will just return He sits by His Father right now. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2013 December,12,2014

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 12/13/2014 9:37:00 AM

D I do like melting clock as well . I am really intrigued by his sketches and drawings and how he uses symbols.He makes me mad. Just imagine"THE DANCE" o God.Love...rajat

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/13/2014 8:08:00 AM

Lovely triolet Dorian! We all wait for His return my dear!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 12/13/2014 8:13:00 AM

Hi Dr.Upma! Hope all is well with you my dear friend.Been so busy around. I want to wish you a very happy Merry Chritmas and your family! Thank you so kindly for your very nice visit and comments. I appreciate it so much. :) Love and hugs! Xxx D.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 12/13/2014 3:11:00 AM

Wonderful D. God bless you .....rajat

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 12/13/2014 9:13:00 AM

Merry Christmas D. May god bless you.Loooooooooooove to you and your family. To all MERRY CHRISTMAS.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 12/13/2014 8:20:00 AM

Eh Hi Rajat ! My very dear friend nice to have you for a visit and all. Pray all is well with you and your family. Thank you so much for all your very kind comments and your support. Youre so sweet and kind. I wish you and yours a very happy Merry Christmas! Have a very lovely day! :) love and hugs! xxxxx D.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 12/12/2014 9:10:00 PM

Beautiful Triolet Dorian. Return he will. :-).

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 12/13/2014 8:25:00 AM

Hi Brenda! Hope all well with you my very dear friend! Thank you so much for your dropping by again and your awesome comments. I much appreciated you and all. I want to wish a very Happy Christmas! To you and your loved ones. Have an sunny day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.