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Riding In a Car With My Son

We said our goodbyes Promising not to stay too long My son settling in The roads to the beach Straight and empty That winter’s night The Doors were on tape Morrison's deep voice Chanting “Riders on the Storm… Into this world we’re thrown…” Dashboard burnishing dull green My son Arranging action figures Asking questions As only a ten year old could While I drove Following the moon Chasing the stars Peering ahead Into the darkness Wondering what he would be like When he grew up. Foolishly, I believed there Would be more nights And more times to ride together Only to carelessly Let them slip away. Years later We were together again My son driving On the straight and empty roads Pursuing his own dreams We were just like two guys Following the shoreline Talking Sharing Searching for a piece of the moon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/8/2011 1:38:00 PM
Nice poem. It brought back memories of taking my Dad for a ride back to his high school haunts and his bakery route in the late 40's. Even to the dance Hall he went to as a kid in Lakeside, Pa. Congrats on this heartwarming feature. Vince
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Date: 10/3/2011 11:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Edmund. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/9/2009 8:17:00 AM
This applies to most all parents, who think that there will be time....yet in a blink of an eye, they are driving, and we are riding along watching. Well done~ Carrie
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Date: 1/9/2009 7:56:00 AM
I have two sons and two daughters and can honestly say I am witnessing the reversal as you have detailed here. The clarity in this is amazing as is the sentimentality of the write. Excellent! MIchael
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Date: 1/9/2009 7:08:00 AM
This is outstanding...I am putting this into my faves..such a heartfelt write and the ride must of been breathtaking...I could see it all and howthis little man...I have a son and he does the same with his action figures..you make me want to write about him...terrific!
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