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Ridiculously Sensible

I was not impressed by his super mediocre talent The kind one should keep under wraps exposed To a world of less well known and near do well designers Who struggle easily with mundane exotic tasks which, when left In the hands of expert amateurs would not seem so Ridiculously sensible at a time such as now ~*~ Note: For Kristen Bruni's "Oxymoronica" Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/16/2013 9:17:00 AM
I always thought OXY MORONS were politicians carrying a bottle of bleach.
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Date: 1/26/2011 8:38:00 AM
you are so talented, thanks for sharing x
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Date: 1/23/2011 8:22:00 PM
Great write as usual! I love the twists you have here with all your word play!
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Date: 1/23/2011 5:40:00 PM
This is really clever! Wisely done :) I've known many "expert amateurs"! Hugs, Kris~
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Date: 1/23/2011 8:46:00 AM
Wow....you fulfilled this Oxy so cleverly....that we almost have to read it twice to catch the contradictions!! Well done!! love, Carrie
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Date: 1/23/2011 7:29:00 AM
Annalise this is great.. u did a fantastic job with the oxymoronic lines... and good luck in the contest.. luv the first one... and your title.. like my "True Myth"...super ... enjoy a blessed day luv..
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Date: 1/23/2011 6:02:00 AM
Not only does your poem have all the necessary ingredients for great oxymorons, but it also makes a point. Great job with this contest entry, dear friend. Hope to see your poem in the winners' circle. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/23/2011 2:14:00 AM
Best of luck with your greatness exposed here in this write. Love, Joy (Jew)
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Date: 1/22/2011 9:23:00 PM
Lots of wonderful oxy in this poem, best of luck in the contest~~
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