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Rickshaw Labia

Rickshaw |abia punish my honey drink my creamy dream eat my children between fat-bread Stulted pedantic canker-bloom Your bird-plucked eyes will gas-up and advertise

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Date: 3/2/2021 8:18:00 AM
Wow. I like it. Mike Tyson meets Erica Jong. and Rickshaw Labia - a great name for a band!
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Robert Warlov
Date: 4/4/2021 10:46:00 AM
Thanks and sorry for the late reply. Not "busy" really but age is a thinning process. I think Kerouac in his book "On the road" said it best: "love is a duel"
Date: 10/16/2016 8:23:00 PM
OH MY, now that was sure vividly different!!Your style is unique
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Robert Warlov
Date: 10/17/2016 5:57:00 PM
I was just cursing her out, but being a poet... well. "Pedantic" probably sent her to the dictionary.
Date: 10/11/2016 7:48:00 AM
Bat shyte crazy good, no matter how you arrived at this juncture. Uncharted territory here.
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Robert Warlov
Date: 10/11/2016 2:19:00 PM
High-praise from someone whose work reflects such deft, surgical precision. My obsequious thanks.
Date: 10/11/2016 6:15:00 AM
Result from a twenty-year marriage to a sociopath?
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