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Rich-Heart

For Richard Lamoureux's "Any line" contest. Richard Seale-d Door's line: slammed shut are the doors in "A mind made up". You told me before slammed shut are the doors when my love for you went astray I got my comeuppance he's worth not a tuppence and rumor has it he's gay Lest I've need of another visit to me brother sometime for a quick howdy-do or longing for discourse in code as of Morse on the stealth oiled a hinge, p'haps two Ah, found me a crack Leech-a is back my love for the other's dissipated you smile goodly, warmly longingly, lovingly my return welcome and anticipated Delysia Hendricks

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/3/2013 10:28:00 PM

Just passing thru and thought I'd say hello!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/28/2013 10:47:00 PM

Rereading this one. It sure does have some funny lines in it!!!

Richard D Seal

Date: 9/27/2013 6:56:00 PM

Hey, congratulations, so pleased to see this in winners list, RICHly deserved lol. Glad to be of assistance haha. Take care, Richard and thank you

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/21/2013 1:13:00 AM

How nice to see this one finally. And you won with it. BIG congrats for your well deserved win. It was fun seeing the line you decided to emulate.

Skat A

Date: 9/18/2013 2:11:00 PM

Delysia.......this is a lovely win..... luv ~SKAT~

Tim Ryerson

Date: 9/17/2013 6:03:00 PM

I'm certainly not gay I'll have you know!...Hilarious as is your usual and if this don't place first I'm gonna file a protest...Not sure who TO yet but I will file nonetheless - Tim

Karen Anglesey

Date: 9/15/2013 5:14:00 PM

Great poem inspired by a line from another poet. Lovely and very matter of fact ...congratulations on your win :)

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 9/15/2013 1:21:00 PM

Beautifully done Delysia. I like it my friend.

Jack Ellison

Date: 9/15/2013 8:31:00 AM

I believe I owe you a congratulatory note... this be it! Congrats dear Delysia! Love and hugs, Jack xoxoxox

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/14/2013 4:18:00 PM

dropping by to say hello.

Donna Jones

Date: 9/14/2013 12:47:00 PM

Loved it again....congratulations!!!! And love your pic....

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/14/2013 7:30:00 AM

nicely penned...congrats on your win!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/13/2013 8:29:00 PM

Hi Sweet Delysia, --A beautiful poem and line... congratulations :-)...xox~ LINDA

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 9/13/2013 1:35:00 PM

This is really good and great for the contest. Thanks for sharing.... lucilla

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/13/2013 10:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning place Delysia xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/13/2013 8:57:00 AM

Congrats on the win in the contest, Delysia

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/13/2013 8:46:00 AM

This one made me smile. Thanks for entering my contest.

Donna Jones

Date: 9/12/2013 9:23:00 PM

Outstanding !!

Dan Kearley

Date: 9/12/2013 8:49:00 PM

Hey-hey! Look who's back! So happy to see you again. So nice of you to stop by. :o)

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 9/8/2013 10:55:00 AM

Girl; This is good. I love it and it will do good in the contest. Thanks for sharing. ...Lucilla

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/7/2013 3:35:00 PM

:0) Thanks for supporting my contest!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/7/2013 3:33:00 PM

Hello Delysia, For some reason the first visuals that came to my mind were of a bad relationship. An excellent piece to go with Richard's line. I can't seem to stop reading your poem. I honestly read it 3 times. Made a lot of sense out of something you picked from one fine line. awesome, and thanks so much for being the lovely poet you are... Good Luck In the contest... Linda

Richard D Seal

Date: 9/7/2013 2:39:00 PM

Hi Sis, I am honoured you've chosen one of my lines for this contest.You did tell me you'd steal one sooner or later lol. You should have taken my advice. Yes, I told you before, To slam that door, And tell him to be on his way, He was no good for you, See my words were true, Likes your parting shot, rumour he’s gay. Good luck in the contest Licia. Take care, Richard

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/7/2013 1:11:00 PM

- Oh ... very good poem, Delysia !!!!! - Luck in contest ! - Have a great weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/7/2013 1:06:00 PM

Hey you....the poem is AMAZING...Girl, you got to brush up on your Morse Code cause I read you like a book! Yea...my insight is KEEN! So, Mr Seal is the inspiration behind this write...He is inspiring! I'm sure he will be flattered no end...Thanks for all the visits. I'll forgive yo for going MIA... Your posts were stupendous.....thanks!