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Ribbons Many Colors On Display Openly Casket Closes Sadly Meaning Nothing

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/18/2012 12:31:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s contest Christopher. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/4/2012 3:35:00 PM

congrats Christopher on an excellent write and win for truth or dare luv..

Christopher Bunton
Date: 3/4/2012 6:33:00 PM

Thank You!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/4/2012 11:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Truth and Dare and Free Verse" contest Christopher. Love, Carol

Christopher Bunton
Date: 3/4/2012 6:32:00 PM

Thank You!

David Williams

Date: 3/4/2012 5:32:00 AM

Christopher congrats on your win..David

Christopher Bunton
Date: 3/4/2012 6:32:00 PM

Thank You!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/3/2012 9:31:00 PM

lol... so short...but,,i loved it.., Christopher Thank you for supporting my contest. Congratulations with your wonderful entry;-) well done~ALWAYS PD*

Christopher Bunton
Date: 3/4/2012 6:32:00 PM

Thank You!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/22/2011 10:25:00 AM

Sad..I feel that you have lost someone important in your life..Good descriptive work in a few short lines..Thanks for stoppping by..Sara

Christopher Bunton
Date: 3/4/2012 6:32:00 PM

Thank You!!

Robert Pettit

Date: 12/21/2011 9:57:00 PM

A fine example of a cinquain. The fourth line touches the emotions of any reader. Overall, a fine job.

Christopher Bunton
Date: 3/4/2012 6:32:00 PM

Thank you!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/21/2011 4:08:00 PM

oh, so sad. And I like the stark contrast of the colorful ribbons and the last line.

Christopher Bunton
Date: 3/4/2012 6:31:00 PM

Thank you!