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Rib-Eye Steaks On the Pit

Rib-eye steaks are on the pit Seasoned with dad’s rub Are you all ready to grub Meat will fall off bone One bite, it’ll be gone Then drink Ice, Tea!

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Bill Baker

Date: 6/5/2022 5:26:00 PM

I ready to eat. :-) Nice imagery, Alexis. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/5/2022 11:11:00 AM

Well done, Alexis. Knocks the shine off my tuna sandwich! Janice

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/5/2022 9:56:00 AM

Yummy!

Joseph May

Date: 6/5/2022 6:10:00 AM

A tasty rib-eye, Very nicely penned Alexis, Have a nice day

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/5/2022 5:12:00 AM

Appetizing images, Alexis. So well written my friend.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 6/4/2022 9:30:00 PM

Mmmmmmm, scrumptious! An expertly crafted epulaeryu, Alexis. It made me hungry. Blessings and hugs, Evelyn

Michael Tor

Date: 6/4/2022 8:07:00 PM

Alexis this tasty piece is a favorite for me... God bless you Dear...

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/4/2022 7:52:00 PM

You make it sound so tasty, wish I was there, I'd bring the home made ice tea to go with it, love, :)

Deb M

Date: 6/4/2022 5:26:00 PM

Sounds mouth watering and delicious…without the iced tea after! Enjoyed this poem Alexis! Debx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/4/2022 5:21:00 PM

This sounds yummy Alexis. Barbecue is the best. I no longer eat beef but I can eat pork ribs. Blessings xxoo

David Kavanagh

Date: 6/4/2022 1:58:00 PM

Rib-eye to Ice tea, you’ve woven your way quite appetisingly through this one Alexis, even remembering Dad’s rub, brings an extra dynamic and flavour to the reader, great one for the contest, cheers David