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Rhythms of the Seashore

The ocean journey ends gathering at the shore. An undulating sea climaxes onto the sandy beach depositing tangles of seaweed, debris and shells. Rocky sea caves reverberate booms of incoming waves while the incessant cries of seagulls squawk as they compete with pelicans for food. Sea breezes whip up salty sprays, like diamond rivulets that splash skyward toward the sunlight. A wild symphony of nature, unchanged by the passage of time. Written on 2/1/2016

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Date: 2/11/2016 5:35:00 AM
You delight with descriptive powers, Laura! Lovely imagery which tempts the reader to partake in the beauty of your seashore. ~ Congratulations ... making it to the final list was not easy, since there was great competition. Regards // paul
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/11/2016 5:13:00 PM
Thank you very much, Paul! I am thankful I got in there somewhere, as I know Craig has very high standards when he sponsors/judges a contest. I appreciate your encouraging words :)
Date: 2/11/2016 4:20:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Laura!!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/11/2016 5:12:00 PM
Thank you, Dr. Upma :)
Date: 2/10/2016 11:16:00 PM
Lovely piece, laura, hang on while I get my bathing costume on. Congrats! Viv x
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/11/2016 12:07:00 AM
HahaaH! Okay ;)
Date: 2/10/2016 8:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/11/2016 12:08:00 AM
Thanks, Susan. I appreciate your kind words :)
Date: 2/10/2016 4:56:00 PM
Laura,congrats on your placement in the contest!!! *smiles* -luloo
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/10/2016 7:29:00 PM
Thank you, Laura :)
Date: 2/2/2016 3:25:00 PM
succinct and very descriptive passage. I like it a lot.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/2/2016 11:29:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea! I'm glad you like this :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/2/2016 3:32:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea! I'm glad you like this :)
Date: 2/2/2016 7:25:00 AM
A very descriptive write. Your words paint a beautiful picture. I'm certain this will do well. A7
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/2/2016 3:31:00 PM
Thanks so much, Viv! Glad you liked my poem :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/2/2016 11:21:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel, for stopping by with your kind comments:)
Date: 2/2/2016 12:24:00 AM
My God, Laura, I can even smell Ozone! Lovely, descriptive, soothing piece, I'm sure it will do well. Viv x
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/2/2016 12:50:00 PM
Thanks so much, Viv! Glad you liked my poem :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/2/2016 11:21:00 AM
Thanks so much, Viv! Glad you liked my poem :)
Date: 2/2/2016 12:17:00 AM
A glimpse of the infinity. Thank you for the pleasant experience of reading the nice poem.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/2/2016 12:50:00 PM
Thank you very much for your kind words, Probir! I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/2/2016 11:22:00 AM
Thank you very much for your kind words, Probir! I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem :)
Date: 2/1/2016 11:59:00 PM
Hello Laura ... you have painted a great picture with words - good luck - Lindsay
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/2/2016 12:13:00 AM
Thank you, Lindsay! I appreciate your kind and encouraging comments:)
Date: 2/1/2016 11:00:00 PM
excellent laura
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/1/2016 11:23:00 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed my poem, Francis. Thank you :)

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