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Rhythmic Slumber

***************************** Strumming guitar necks In a dyslexic manner While on lsd Mind turning pages Psychedelic music sheets Colorful notes dance Life wind cries Jimi Living in a purple haze Rainbow rhythm sleeps ******************************

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  1. Date: 5/13/2010 12:40:00 PM
    Excellent tribute piece to a brilliant rock guitarist Abe, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest >> James

  1. Date: 5/13/2010 7:35:00 AM
    As always, have your unique and wonderful way with words! I love this unique poem, it says so much, so few words, but has such impact! Congratulations dear Abe! ~ Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 5/13/2010 7:03:00 AM
    Congrats Abe on your winning poem in the Jimi contest with this great synopsis of his life and times in the Choka form .. a well deserved win so enjoy your victory ..luv.. "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 5/13/2010 6:23:00 AM
    Hey Congratz dude! Spectacularificous HalfBreedMexican Be out!!!! ~$@V@^^@#~

  1. Date: 5/12/2010 10:16:00 PM
    Congrats Abe~Nice haze!!!~rick

  1. Date: 5/12/2010 9:31:00 PM
    Abe, congratulations on your success in my Jimi Hendrix Contest...Raul

  1. Date: 5/12/2010 9:04:00 AM
    Just a note kind sir, I am aware of the Native American plight and would like some verses on it. I was trying to much real human, blood,s weat & tears went on..why were so few remembering and giving me dry history recounts? There were miners & asian chain gangs on the railroads, there were mountain much color, scents, tastes, sights....this was the westward movement. Loved your verse above! A real winner!

  1. Date: 5/11/2010 7:47:00 PM
    Sweet write Abe and good luck in Raul's contest .. u captured Jimi perfectly in your lines.. enjoyed ...luv.. from the "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 5/9/2010 10:34:00 PM
    Superb work Abe.. especially the verse..Rainbow rhythm sleeps..I love it...Charma

  1. Date: 5/9/2010 2:48:00 AM
    A wonderful write, Abe

  1. Date: 5/8/2010 5:55:00 PM
    such a waste of a great talent!!

  1. Date: 5/8/2010 4:16:00 PM
    Was watching Jimi on youtube last night and noticed that "dyslexic manner" of which you write, Abe. The stars in stripe formations are a nice touch. He did seem to live and create art in a "purple haze." Love, Carolyn