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Rhymes Rhymes Rhymes

Sat under Sun,thinking,What to write.. Fat Singer ''Bun'',singing,''Cut the shoe White''... Rat-Seller gone,saying,''Shut the Zoo at Night'' Everybody busy,keeping it all nice and tight.. But here i'm,still thinking,what to write!

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Robert Lindley

Date: 7/17/2014 8:37:00 AM

Congrats on your win!! A suggestion, open up and write what is in your heart.

Saba Khan
Date: 7/18/2014 2:23:00 AM

Thank you very much! :)

John Pen

Date: 4/23/2014 10:45:00 AM

Hilarious

Saba Khan
Date: 5/15/2014 11:39:00 PM

LOL :p

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/20/2014 1:03:00 AM

Hello, Saba , congratulations......awesome win....pd

Saba Khan
Date: 4/21/2014 12:54:00 AM

:) Thankuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/19/2014 11:35:00 AM

Hahaha cute also..:) when writing something with a theme it's really harder you need to thing for quite sometime to get it on:) Congratulations :), olive eloisa

Saba Khan
Date: 4/21/2014 12:55:00 AM

yep right ;) thanku :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/19/2014 11:00:00 AM

Dear Saba, Sometimes it does take along time to get the inspiration. What a fun contest this was! Congratulations on your win. Love and blessings for a happy Easter weekend, Carolyn

Saba Khan
Date: 4/21/2014 12:55:00 AM

thankss a zill :) Happy Easter!!