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Rhapsody In Three

On the day they united The first song was born The moon ceased it’s orbit They took Earth by storm Oh perfect endeavor They designed second song Terribly clever Yet sweet and so strong With piano and voice With word and with pen They made it happen Again and again Fire, subtle and fleeting Quenched before it could start A ballad so lovely Twas’ the sound of a heart Somehow the magic Began to subside It became more illusive The harder they tried So broken as they tore apart She left behind her soul Consumed by an aching heart Just waiting to grow old She looked ‘cross the courtyard Her hands clenched up tight As a familiar face Appeared in the light Time stood still with memories From over the years Back came the laughter The pain and the fears I don’t want to fall, she said Therefore I will not fly Take me with chains To the land of goodbye

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/30/2014 10:00:00 AM
Ps., Tis A Beautiful Title: Rhapsody In Three *:*(*
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Date: 1/30/2014 9:57:00 AM
† Listening Unto The Goo Goo Dolls, City Of Angels, Aka, Iris, Sweet Beautiful Ellie ˜ 'I Just Want You To Know Who I Am.' *.* A Very Eloquent As Beautiful Painting We Find, By An Extremely Beautiful Woman: Her 'Creation.' ˜ We've Got The Keys Baby Girl! There Is No Goodbye In HIS Land Of The Living....Welcome To Her Loving's PoetrySoup ˜ My Love, Always, John
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Date: 1/29/2014 6:59:00 PM
Very sweet write. I'm expecting more from you.
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Date: 1/29/2014 8:32:00 AM
Hi Ellie ..Welcome to Poetry Soup!!!..you made an awesome poem ,dear... I hope you enjoy the great experience as you go beyond writing poems...i'm sure you'll love the people here..they are so kind and very supportive...Good luck to your journey in poetry world!!! ..always..AiyaH :0)
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Ellie King
Date: 1/29/2014 4:42:00 PM
Everyone is amazing so far, thanks for your feedback hun! -E
Date: 1/28/2014 6:52:00 PM
Hi Ellie, wow... The imagery's amazing. The sound enlightens a good feeling, even though she doesn't want to fall..... Hello, my new poet friend, I want to thank you for accepting my friendship, ha-ha now you'll never be rid of me, :) Can't wait to read a new one from you tomorrow... SKAT
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Ellie King
Date: 1/29/2014 4:41:00 PM
This works for me! ;)
Date: 1/28/2014 6:28:00 PM
Very Sweet! -R.R.
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Ellie King
Date: 1/29/2014 4:40:00 PM
Thanks so much! :)

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