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Rhapsody In Red

When morning breaks in shades of wine... with claret skies to blush the dawn... I will stretch and yawn, and thank the night for this polished, dappled day I will wait until the sun is high, and dew upon the rose is dry I'll have my cup, .. with toast and jam... then, make escape, ..........for the quest begins, to seek my small reward It happens slowly... gathering reason from an untamed mind up into the meadow where the brambles climb twisted and tangled, through the burgundy vines deftly my fingers, while probing the maze will reach for wild berries.....warm from the day thumping their goodness, one after one into the bucket, dented and worn A search through thorns, a prick on my thumb till my back is ripe, and wet in the sun Finger painting my faded old jeans Knowing my cheeks are flushing in pink Sucking sweet juice from two crimson thumbs Who cares a lick, of the thorns or a bee? I am a bee, buzzing serenity... plucking small bits of reason and sanity taking home goodness in a battered tin pail feeling alive, on this wild-flowered hill Tonight's sweet delight, is warm berry cobbler, oozing with goodness of juicy red gems staining my tongue, and turning lips scarlet dripping like blood drops onto my chin Yet never as splendid, or tasting as fine, as warmed by my smile, straight from the vine Picking red berries, and freeing my mind * * * * * * * * under clouds tinged vermilion from a gold-rimmed crimson sun

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Date: 10/20/2013 7:05:00 PM
This is beautiful and has a quality I seldom find in free verse. Flows and yes has a rhyme. Congratulations. Love, Joyce.
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Date: 10/17/2013 4:07:00 PM
I loved all of the descriptions and objects related to the color red. A very vivid poem, that took me back to warm summertime! Really great work, Carrie! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the great comments. They are very much appreciated!
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Date: 10/17/2013 6:13:00 AM
this is another excellent free verse poem from you, carrie, very deserving of its win, many different facets of red in this...I honestly don't know why you don't put a poetry collection together and submit it to publishers; your work is certainly good enough - better than many published poets writing today! :)
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Date: 10/16/2013 9:11:00 PM
Carrie, this is one of my faves.... xox~ Linda
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Date: 10/16/2013 6:58:00 PM
Oh what a wonderful picture you painted. Berry picking in the warm sun. I hope you got enough berries to last all winter. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/16/2013 12:03:00 PM
Right there with you Carrie.....and could taste that warm cobbler....congratulations....
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Date: 10/15/2013 10:05:00 PM
Carrie, you are amazing.. :) Congratulations! --LOVE-- ~SKAT~
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Date: 6/29/2012 1:13:00 PM
carrie, congrats on another great win...David
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Date: 6/28/2012 10:10:00 AM
Wow, Carrie! I am certainly humbled to be sharing places with you-- this one is just a superb poem! I love how you took on red in a different level here! i just can't help but smile as I read through your lines! You certainly made me feel that rhapsody and hehe that part about "fingerpainting" your jeans-- loved that! I'd do that too :) Very rich red write! Super congrats hugs on your win :D!! Thanks so much for passing by my poem and blog :D I will catch up you soon :D
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Date: 6/27/2012 12:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the Summer contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/27/2012 10:29:00 AM
raging in beautiful, red abandon, carrie... my super congrats and hugggs! :)
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Date: 6/27/2012 8:13:00 AM
Very nice... Congratulations on your win... Terry
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Date: 6/27/2012 1:36:00 AM
A superb write and a win to match! Congratulations to you Carrie. Just beautiful!
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Date: 6/26/2012 6:38:00 PM
AWESOME, Carrie. I just love this and I love berries too. Big congrats on this well deserved win.
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Date: 6/26/2012 5:49:00 PM
Carrie,, congratulations on a job well done... DG. has some of the toughest contest.. I am so happy to see you on her wonderful list.. Always~PD
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Date: 6/26/2012 4:17:00 PM
I fondly remember my berry summers 8 was blackberries, my son's second was strawberries, and the first season of my own raspberries when I was happily wed. THANK YOU! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/26/2012 4:17:00 PM
PS You were our shobert after Charlottes hellish heat!
Date: 6/26/2012 3:25:00 PM
congrats on your winning poem, just exquisite writing carrie, really paints a vivid picture in the mind :-)
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Date: 6/26/2012 2:31:00 PM
A beautiful write and a worthy win. I am glad to se you get your due. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/26/2012 1:41:00 PM
Congrats on your amazing win, Carrie! You have reminded me of berry picking with my grandmother in Jersey many years ago. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 6/26/2012 12:27:00 PM
Great win with this poem. I loved the picture it painted. Mike
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Date: 6/26/2012 11:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem.
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Date: 5/7/2010 10:32:00 PM
finally got to see the winner of food contest. a beauty! congratulations. Luv, andrea
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Date: 5/6/2010 8:05:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your 1st place win in Sami's contest... great design to your poem and even greater words ... enjoy your well deserved win at the top... luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 5/5/2010 11:30:00 PM
Congrats on your Ist Place win, Carrie...Very nice! ....Jimmy
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Date: 5/5/2010 7:42:00 PM
Congrats on the win
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