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Rhapsody In Blue (Haiku For Carol Brown's Spring Competition) Haiku No 30

Bluebells, more bluebells Hyacinths' first blooms of Spring Rhapsody in Blue.

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/9/2010 6:09:00 AM

hot poem!! very beautiful!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/6/2010 5:08:00 PM

Another well deserved win, congratulations, Deirdre!

David Byrne

Date: 2/5/2010 8:18:00 PM

Well done, good luck with the competition!

Constance La France

Date: 2/5/2010 6:55:00 PM

I love bluebells, and hyacinths, lovely images you create, and thanks for your comment on my poetry.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/5/2010 2:19:00 PM

yES YES sPRING!oops blue is such an unusal color in flowers I love it!

Brian Strand

Date: 2/5/2010 12:48:00 AM

Indeed music in pictures Deirdre.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/4/2010 1:39:00 AM

Beautiful blooms do come to mind with this piece :) Congratulations on your win with this Deirdre :)

Sue Mason

Date: 2/3/2010 9:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Carol's contest!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/3/2010 3:54:00 AM

Thanks for reminding me of the scent of Hyacinths and their beautiful color. Keep the creative pen flowing for with poems like these we won't need a scratch test sheet. Sara

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 2/2/2010 11:39:00 PM

Nice musical Haiku! Congrats on your success in Carol's contest. Best wishes, Caroline.

Date: 2/2/2010 6:15:00 PM

Interesting approach to the topic. Nice use of alliteration. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Carol's contest. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Margaret Foster

Date: 2/2/2010 5:08:00 PM

The picture of bluebell woods come to mind, Pleasant to read this morning. thank you for your kind comments today...Margaret

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/27/2010 4:53:00 AM

Thank you for entering my contest Deirdre. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/26/2010 12:11:00 PM

What a lovely vision! (And thoughts of lovely music as well!) ~ Carrie