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Rewriting Life

I wish to go back to a time that Never Was To a land of Rainbows and Butterflies Recreate and redefine Fool my mind Care free laughter Building sandcastle Holding hands A world of atta boy and job well done Playing with friends Back yard tire swings Report cards with A's Building a tree house with dad Baseball and hotdogs A proud hand patting my head Growing up in a family home A place where true love is shown Ice tea served on a porch Running through sprinklers While mom and dad look on Growing up Feeling secure Hands that are only lifted in praise Life long friendships Shared experiences No sad memories stuck in my mind If only it could be real But perhaps if I believe I can make it true A past that was soaked in sunshine With a cloudy sky transformed to blue

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/19/2013 9:11:00 PM
I love this one, richard and it says so much about YOU. goodnight now. I am needing to get offline!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/20/2013 1:31:00 PM
thanks Andrea
Date: 2/19/2013 8:57:00 PM
What a beautiful poem you have penned. If only it could happen and we could go back. Those were the good old days. many blessings to you Richard. have a good night. Lucilla
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Date: 2/19/2013 5:07:00 PM
Beautiful! :) wishing you a great afternoon Rick :) - hug, yanny
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/19/2013 5:36:00 PM
Thanks Yanny.
Date: 2/19/2013 4:28:00 PM
Amen!!! Wonderful poem
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/19/2013 4:37:00 PM
Thanks Donna
Date: 2/19/2013 11:27:00 AM
RICHARD!!! This is awesome! If only...we could rewrite parts of our lives that brought us pain! This is an exceptional write!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/19/2013 2:13:00 PM
I'm glad you like it Eileen

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