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If you continue to hide How will they know? Who you are What you are Behind all the guilt Hidden behind the negative thoughts
A gem
You don’t realise the depth of you You don’t get the image God sees when He looks at you Faults - mistakes all forgotten Shackles broken long ago The only prison you are in; is man made By your hands By your thoughts By the misconstrued image you see In others eyes Focus on your race Not those around you This chapter is for your book It's your path
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/2/2022 3:37:00 AM
So happy to come across this beautiful gem written in 2014, thanks to PS featuring this now, in 2022!
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Date: 12/26/2014 10:22:00 PM
WILMA, Awesome Best of 2014 poem, and win.... Congrats.... Linda
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Date: 12/18/2014 5:21:00 AM
Very interesting message nicely done, congratulations on the win, Wilma
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Date: 12/17/2014 1:25:00 PM
such a beautiful message can see why you chose this for carols contest - congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/12/2014 4:12:00 PM
hey Wilma. I have to get home now and can't find recent poems of yours new for me. but wanted to say thanks for reading my food poem and glad you got a chuckle from it. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/12/2014 10:01:00 AM
These are beautiful words of wisdom, Wilma! It's wonderful reading your poetry again...thanks for stopping by my page. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 11/12/2014 9:08:00 AM
Wilma It's great. A lesson for all of us. You are blessed by your muses. This is my favorite...very strong message...I am adding it to my fav. list...HUGS! ....rajat
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Date: 11/11/2014 4:06:00 PM
wow, this is one of your best, Wilma. you are in top form here and this poem has a great message for every single person. So glad to see you!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/10/2014 11:01:00 AM
What a wonderful message woven so skillfully with your pen... a message I so whole heartedly agree with !! Thank you !!
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Date: 11/10/2014 9:54:00 AM
really very beautifully crafted piece wilma excellent pen
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