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As lovely geisha That can stop any man With just one look And is taught to move To and fro With fans n clogs For all to say ah

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/28/2009 12:52:00 PM
An upbeat, entertaining poem, Leah!
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Date: 3/28/2009 11:25:00 AM
Enchanting. This is a really nice write. It is filled with a sadness though. I see that the subject is unhappy with the life that they have. If this is a reality for you I have this to say... So much beauty lies within the soul of this writer. The gift of beautiful words are enough to capture the heart of any man and therefore your beauty is shining like a beacon leading love and magic your way. True beauty of the soul is beauty beyond compare. Great writing. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/28/2009 9:44:00 AM
Nice write...With just one look, to stop any man, boy that would be something..Keep writing and sharing..GB Always Tyesha
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