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for years you spend your whole life trying to fiqure out everything that went wrong in your life . inside your bright mind of unleft wisdom you have already known the answer to your question all along stronger love is real its right infront of you when you already witnessed everyone infront of you all give up also they lost there hope. my sad eyes cry cry cry rain drops of tommarows blue sad broken rain. left here all alone on my own dazzling into the unknown broken down angels silent loud crys of tears i shed i will never understand the parents that put me here outkasted was confused all those tears i shed of blue i see two lonley souls searching for happiness along the shadowed burning loud train ride into hells fire sad life of ace's i was thrown my eyes see i was saved all along i already knew deep down my shallow heart, god threw me a stone , a blessing in a package i found real love through a lil girl who only weighed 1 pound 7 ounces at birth today she is my love of the blowing trumphets as if they called today upon my grace.

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Date: 11/27/2017 8:12:00 AM
you should edit your poem 1st line fiqure its figure
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Date: 5/20/2017 11:23:00 AM
Although you ve written it beautifully, it was really a pleasant reading it but it s not basically a poem, you ve written it in an article type way, but still I really enjoyed it
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Ashley Rainwater
Date: 5/26/2017 10:16:00 PM
thank you
Date: 10/22/2016 5:02:00 PM
dnt kno how
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Date: 10/22/2016 11:54:00 AM
comment?
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