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Rewind

Fill me with sand and turn me over Create a black hole and let me jump Make me Technicolor and press repeat Or thin me into tape and select rewind Send me back to this previous life Let me relive what just happened Or you can just kiss me again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/29/2014 1:37:00 AM
Beautiful, love the last line!
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Date: 11/26/2014 4:37:00 PM
I'd go for the kiss faith lol:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 11/26/2014 4:46:00 PM
That's the option I went for :) Thank you for all the lovely comments Jan! xxx

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