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This was inspired by that great band The Beatles they tried to show the right way sadly it fell on deaf ears

Hatred, anger, flames burning up souls destruction, killings all manner of evil brother turning on brother, father on son riots, police being so incredibly brutal. Wars for no good reason corrupt powers Bloodshed and children skinned alive how did we all arrive at such devastation this surely is not how we should live. The Beatles sang of love and peace Tried to show us the way of harmony peace is the only real way to prosper and become united with all races and creeds Flower power, hippie's were on the right track how did their message go so badly wrong how can we one moment sing and enjoy love it shows us all in a terrible horrible spot light. Instead let us do good things, have kind thoughts reach out to help others, learn to live in peace let sunshine into our hearts fill souls with love, kindness and reach out with love, love and more love.

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Date: 10/5/2023 10:23:00 AM
A message we all should heed. There is so much evil in this world today. Let peace reign!
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Date: 10/1/2023 6:30:00 PM
If it makes you feel any better, that drtbag that quoted scripture and gave you a hard time, he kicked out both of his sons and disowned them because they joined the military to fight for their country. He is not the one to quote scripture to anyone. I’m so sorry you got trolled.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/1/2023 7:01:00 PM
I am good tnx Mark takes more than to frighten me I have been on here 9 years going on 10 I soon had he nailed hugs Shadow tnx for caring
Date: 10/1/2023 6:04:00 PM
I like how you think, well said!
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Mark Koplin
Date: 10/1/2023 6:31:00 PM
It’s nice to meet you.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/1/2023 6:27:00 PM
good to meet you Mark ty for nice comments hugs Shadow
Date: 10/1/2023 1:33:00 PM
Well said Shadow, and I recall John Lennon singing a song 'Give Peace a chance', obviously the message has been lost in translation somewhere along the line. I love the uplifting ending of your work:-) hugs Jan xx
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/1/2023 2:06:00 PM
TY Jan its always good to hear from you love and lightness Hugs Shadow

Book: Shattered Sighs